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The Pirate and a Thief.
A Captain Hook / Killian Jones + Emma Swan / Robin Hood Fanfic.  

Chapter 1:  Introducing Captain Hook

    It was a warm summer's night. The crickets sang loudly outside the tavern, while inside it was rather subdued.  Only a small, lazy crowd lingered.  She sighed and placed her empty glass down on the bar top.  Signaling to the barkeep she left a few gold coins before walking out into the pleasantly warm air.
    Despite the pleasantness of the evening, she felt melancholy.  She'd been hiding in this boring town for nearly two months now.  She missed the forests, her friends. She missed home.
    Not wanting to go back to the small loft where she'd been staying, she sat down outside, against the back wall of the bar, and pulled out the guitar she'd carried on her back.  She strummed a few chords, not playing any song in particular- but the music was beautiful just the same.  Even the crickets stopped to listen.  From the corner of her eye, she saw a group of loud men enter the bar.  From the sound of it, they were already drunk.  Well, seemed like she left the building just in time.  Not recognizing any of them, she figured they were sailors, after all, this was a port town.  Despite their loud voices now coming from inside, she continued to play where she sat, humming a tune.  Engrossed in her musical meditation, she didn't notice one sailor had lagged behind the others and stood a few feet from her, listening.  
    She suddenly felt his eyes upon her, pulling her out of her reverie.  
"No lass, please, keep playing".
    She shook her short blonde hair out of her face. "I was nearly finished anyway", she half grumbled, the mood broken.  
He frowned.  "why is your music so sad?"
  She shrugged.  "It's not. It was just music."
"Ah".  
    She looked at him more closely, slightly taken aback by the handsomeness of the man.  Especially by those light blue eyes coupled with his dark features. Then she noticed his hand.  Or rather, the place where his hand should be.  Her blood went cold.
"Why do you have a hook for a hand?"
"I lost it to a crocodile. And the hook, Well, they couldn't exactly call me Captain Hook without it, could they".
"No, I suppose not", she said darkly.
"And now tell me lass," he said, stepping close to her. "Why is it you look so familiar?"
   
     She'd been found.  After all these months of moving from town to town, she'd been found.  And by Captain Hook no less. The most ruthless pirate of them all.  


*I do not own the characters*
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Wolvnia Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
MORE PLEASE!!! OOO
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Dreamingdreams Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sounds really great I hope that you are going to do more too it. :heart: I would love to read what will happen next!
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Tarnisis Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely start to an interesting idea. I honestly loved it, though you used 'she' quite a lot. I can't wait to see where this goes and how the story progresses. Captain Swan is one of my favorite ships and I'm really excited to read more! :la:
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chesterzerousygirl Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
darn it! I wanna read more!
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NicolePrince Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013   Writer
Very well done. The dialog flowed nicely. :)
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yum139 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
thanks :)
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Steamland Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student General Artist
awesoem job so far :D however i knwo what pan is liek :D
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